bestowed,
marked by the symbol,
of whitened poetic time,
she gazed back at the 'eye'.
Straight!
a story,
"un-narrated"!
i peeped in honestly,
her resemblance to serenity,
her story,
i tried figuring,
figured?
but instillations are statics,
the dynamics, motionless,
yet those loud sounds i heard.
17 comments:
hmm those eyes.. windows of the heart & mind.. they perhaps speak louder than any words spoken or read but some stories are better left un-narrated ..
such tender words you weave casper ..
Interesting eyes which speaks different can be motionless coz it says a lot than words.
wow!
Keshi.
i like the way you care words.Like a kindergarden teacher..you know they are tender...words just allign whenever you ask them to do so..
like kids they are now dancing..
my eyes smile when i read your lines..
thank you
meet my new zen guru
she is just waiting for casper baba..
bye
take care..
YOu are talking abt the barista experience arent you ?!
Beautiful !
@aria
I am humbled. :)
thank you.
p.s- i hope there are no hard feelings.
@priya
eyes are the mirror to once heart. I read them.. to understand the heart. thanks once again.
@keshi
:)
thaks dear
@man in the painting
thanks a ton sir. i m humbled by your words of appreciations.thanks once again... :)
@cindrella
no re! this is something i wrote for a image i saw in a photo-exibition in delhi. there was this one image that particularly caught my eye.. i kept on looking ionto the eye of the old woman in the image.Hence had to write to let the feelings out.
thanks for you keen observation! nd thanks for the appreciation's.
Deeply observed buddy! eyes talk sometime what the person not.
i liked the ending and esp the last line ... again thought provoking
Alok
Awesome imagery!
Kudos to your poetic art! :)
i'll ask spiderman to take a lesson from you for both if you do same thing with different inputs.
Your web of words has again caught me astounded !! Great !!
Dropping by to say,have a nice week ahead! :)
Yaar update karo!!
This reminds me of a ranting. Now that is not a bad thing mind you. I do writings like these when I am alone. I shout into the wind and find that what I am shouting is a poem. I love this sort of writing. It breaks out of the normal setting of writing poetry and bring a flavor that most do not even grasp. Its a sort of "in your face" kind of poetry. Loved this.
T
man, are you gonna update anytime soon ?
simply 'wow'
liked it terribly.
cheers!
awesome.....lovely....beautiful...awe inspiring!!
Love ur blog!! Nice place!! Will be visiting often :)
@jeevan
thanks alot my friend for your kind words. i need to apologise to you for being a jerk and not visiting ur blog. i realise nd i shall immidiately mend my ways!
:)
@alok
thank you my frind... thank you so much... for ur words inspire me to carry onn!
@sameera
:) poetic art? well if u can call me a poet... i dun think i m one!
but still i am humbled by ur kind words.
@inside our hands...
thank you so much dear, i didn't have 2 take nething as a "bad thing" my dear frind. I m rather humbled and obliged with you kindest words... thanks once agagin!
@deepesh
:) muaah!
welcome back meri jaan! rather than talkin to spiderman.. u shud have a word with the airhostesses to come nd train under moi! :D i wud rahter appriciate that! lolz! god i missed ur blog! nd ur writings! :)
@aayushi/meghna
thanks alot for visiting my insignificant space. thanks for reading a part of my insignificant self. i m humbled nd glad that you liked it. :)
hope to see both of u here often!
god bless!
NOW!
@cindy/sameera
i m touched that you look forward for my writings. but i m really sorry that i am caught up with alot of things. from shifting my current house, to arranging my trip to banaras, i almost forgot my hectic work schedule after my holiday gap.
i promise i shall b back soon! hugs to both of you. always b the angels that you guys are! i pray from ur happiness!
cheers till nxt time! :)
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