The deepest shade of red,
I’m ready to take it to bed,
For all those moments that I have bled,
That deepest shade of red.
Sleep to fly and fly to sleep,
Those moments I swam within deep,
Strangle the self to make me weep,
Ever so long I still feel like a creep,
May be I was scared and fled,
I still want that deepest shade of red.
A song, a rhythm, a desire,
Give me the strength to light the fire,
They make me sore, of which I want more,
Sometime I shall swim myself to the shore,
I can see all my fights in my head,
When I see that deepest shade of red,
Enough’s been done and said,
My lord! Put me to bed,
Would you embrace me when I am dead?
Because I know I will be forever,
That deepest shade of red.
8 comments:
explicit, ironical.. rich with insight and tragic power ..
everytime I read the phrase 'deepest shade of red' I cringed ..
The deepest shade of Art....who said Kurt cobain is not alive!!!
keep it up dude...
it took me 4 sincere readings spread over the period of 2 days to actually understand the theme.
(thanks to my low comprehension level OR your HIGH writing standards)
nice write up.you leave your lingering self amidst the words. :)
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@aria
indeed its the "deepest shade of red"
i felt a strange kinda relief after writing this down.
@ankit
brother... KURT COBAIN? i m not even cose to being in his league.
thanks for the compliments....
@deepesh
Like i told ya... you give way less credit to urself than wat u deserve.
@Tv digital
welcome to my space... hope to se u more... thx once again.
Joy sorrow love and pain
Drive man insane
For we bleed shade of ‘Red’
With hopes to forever remain.
@tosha
remain so shall me for what i said,
remain in me the power i bread,
remain in me the prayers that i have read,
remain in me forever that 'deepest shade of red'.
My response to your poem:
O please don't stay forgotten,
O please don't die your death,
For giving it away,
Don't you see is your strength, immortal,
And you'll live a scarlet king,
Like blood, bright red.
Forever, Forever.
My correction, if thats okay:
**remain so shall I for what i say,
remain in me the power i embed,
remain in me the prayers that i have read,
remain in me forever that 'deepest shade of red'.**
Or atleast I am not understanding what you mean when you say power I bread*
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