Ya khuda,
tu mujhsey,
Mein tujhsey,
Kyon khud se?
Hoon juda.
Dey hateli,
Baandh sahaara,
Dekh doobara,
Khada banda.
Mangey sahaara.
Rahem, rahem.
Aab Baksh,
mere karam.
Aab baksh,
Meri khata,
Aab to dikha,
Koi adaa.
Tu hai. Haan hai.
Yeah ehsaas kara.
Tu sukoon,
Tu kudrat,
Tu hasrat,
Tu nahee juda,
Tu mukammal mere khuda.
P.S- I couldn't translate this piece, i apologies to my friends. But this is more on the spiritual spectrum. Sung in the praise of the lord. I beg him to not separate himself from my existence and also show me the signs of his existence. I beg him to give his hand to save me. i beg him for pitty and forgiveness. He becomes passion, peace, nature, desire for my existence.
13 comments:
I dun u'stand the language but Im sure its superb!
Keshi.
last two lines are awesome... rest I think is to be felt and not for critique ..
btw I just checked your photostream.. the badge here looks cool.. I wanted to put up a show of some paintings once but lost the drive ..
anyway .. I loved that deer waala picture and the bamboo-house(don't know what else to call it!)
and I think few pictures have "you" - quite dashing you look .. *compliments* :)
..so that u fear the seperation..so that u value His existence..so that nothing happens w/o His consent...He provoked this in u,the prayer..never be worrying...he can't detach any of us from himself...
Gud one !
This piece isnt for comments and criticisms.
Like Aria said, its to be felt...and I felt it, even though I aint much too a believer of God.
YOu have your soul in your pen, and magic in your words.
Beautiful !
that sufi feel that touches u beyond words
Alok
I think it shud be a beautiful piece from wat u say Casper.
@keshi
i wish i cud translate this piece.. but somethings are way close to heart to be detached nd converted to something no so heart felt.
thanks for trusting my writings so much.. i m humbled! thank you :)
@aria
thank you so much. i guess you are pretty much rite bout ur assesment.
BTW that guy you see on my photostream is not moi.. he's mah frnd udit.. i haven't put ne pics of mine there.... i am there in the pic with loads of mist... nd the one with the reflection. :)
thanks neways for ur compliments... :)i shall deliever them to mah frind.
@rashi
thank you so much for visit my rambling space.... i have learnt that myself... once again.. thank u soo much for ur beautifully kind words...
i m humbled! thank u
@cindrella
ah! cindy dear... again you just shower your kindest words on me. I dun know wat say... really!
thank u soo soo mch! humbled! :)
@alok
that was a compliment i shall accept very graciously! thanks my frinds.. thank u soo much! :)
@pria
thank you so much pria for trusting me with my words. i wish i cud translate this one also for you all.. but i just cudn't!
i apologise for this! but thanks once agagin for you kindness!
@aria
ur an artist? :) no wonder... no wonder... so wat made you loose the drive my dear...? its never too late... "never". if u want i cud help you out with it. :)
cud i see some of ur work.. that is if u dun mind?
** but somethings are way close to heart to be detached nd converted to something no so heart felt.
I so agree!
And if we translate such things, it loses it's true effect. I so know wut u mean :)
Keshi.
Lovely invocation!HE must have smiled reading this :)
i need not praise for its great.
I need not applaud for its an ovation for itslef.
Great one yet again ...
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