The sounds. I hear them. Lets talk. sip on our thoughts, its cold. our converstions, Relaxed. about, my hunt, My pray, i tell you. you it is! :) and then, I tore the heart out!
this piece is pretty intimate to the mind... u kno the psycotic self.. :)
@cinderella "tearing the heart out" is a metaphor used in the composition to basicaaly say that all the emotions were flushed out! nothing voilent about it. i m pretty peaceful by nature. :D
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i m struck by the insufficiency of even an act like tht ... and i wonder is it still love ... or is it something beyond ...
when u can feel blood rushing thru the veins ... u know u hv read something worthwhile ....
Alok
I dont know what to say - it tore my heart.
as I read thru the initial lines, i could feel the uneasy silence... and then as i read the last line, there was an explosion....
Bhoooommmm !! :)
" mind blowing compositin of words"
loved reading it ya.
Regards
@alok
i don't know that for myself too brother...
i m humbled by your kind words of appriciation.
@aria
thats more than u could have 'said' Thanks:)
@deepesh
thats how it came into me... An EXPLOSION.
@seema gupta
thanks for taking your time out for reading my mess... :) much appriciated. hopw to see you here often.
Shud I say an art of intimacy???
Why'd you have to tear apart the heart ?
@priya
this piece is pretty intimate to the mind... u kno the psycotic self.. :)
@cinderella
"tearing the heart out" is a metaphor used in the composition to basicaaly say that all the emotions were flushed out! nothing voilent about it. i m pretty peaceful by nature. :D
oh..! k...
thankgod...
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