She loved them, Mangoes Had one last night, And smiled, Didn’t taste like before, Without her first bite Did she make them sweet? I know she did. Its that time now, The same season, Without you ‘alphonso’
It was all that you said... but it seems i'm getting it better after reading all the comments :). May be this was for the fact I don't know what Alphonso is :P
10 comments:
CasperBABA... mangoes??
I've never had Alphonso.. for that matter I don't like mangoes ..
but why am I telling you that ..
perhaps coz this poem is more about feeling the undercurrents and not saying much ..
Hum ke Thehre ajanabii itane madaaraato.n ke baad
Phir bane.nge aashnaa kitanii mulaaqaato.n ke baad
Kab nazar me.n aayegii bedaaG sabze kii bahaar
Khuun ke dhabbe dhule.nge kitanii barasaato.n ke baad
- though the above were written by Faiz in totally different context but then oit doesnt stop me from quoting here:)
@tosha
was that surprise.. or a question... or a concern..????
@aria
u right there... bingo!
sometimes i do paint my pain but in lighter hues....
@alok
SUBHAAAN ALAAH.... loved it.. thanks a ton!
Is it a romantic mango or sweetness in love. Beauitful.
Ah, tis good to be amused to yet another fellow poet blogger. :) Mangoes it is. Mangoes only the sweetest 'alphonso'.
Hmmmmmmmmmmm......I'm still wondering if its about Magoes more or feelings!!
@priya
welll it none of em'
its the numbness now after too much of sweetness.
@jeya
'alphonso's' indeed...
thanks alot for dropping by... :)
hope to see more of you here.
@aditi
well its all upto you how you percieve it..
thaks for coming here... hope to see you also pretty often
the intended pun on 'alphonso' was nice to perceive. good work !!
It was all that you said... but it seems i'm getting it better after reading all the comments :). May be this was for the fact I don't know what Alphonso is :P
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