Grab thy soul by the hands,
drag it out to,
face you, the mirror.
what would you ask?
who are you?
how are you?
what are you?
would you have the patience?
to listen,
when it speaks,
speaks out loud,
to tell you,
It hasn’t been you for a while.
would you have the courage?
to defend thy self,
Or,
would you just surrender?
to yourself!
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Surrender
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would you have the courage?
to defend thy self,
Or,
would you just surrender?
to yourself!
"WAH, its really i found some thing very different, have never thought of it, but ya sure after reading this poem, m forced to think abt it"
Great
Regards
That was awesome Casper. defend or surrender? Hmmm 50/50 nah.
A thousand dreams I still believe
I'd make you give them all to me
I'd hold you in my arms and never let go..
I surrender
I Surrender by Celine Dion
This is intense dude! I don't know what I'd do. :-S
I would just surrender to myself and I have no qualms abt it .... not even the pretense of having the courage to fight my ownself ... now you can read this in many ways ..
that doesn't take anything away from your poetry which did make me sit and think for a while and question a lot of things ....
Alok
"emotionless"
yes, that would be the best way to describe my state after reading it.
A self confrontation, self humiliation, self juxtaposition ...
so much 'self' involved and still ... it sounds so selfless ...
How you run on ?!
Mesmerising poetry...
I often find telling myself, "you havent been you since quite a while..."
And then, decide to search for her again, within words and worlds, people and their webs....
Loved this piece. Beautiful !
jai casperbaba! nice blog...and thanks for dropping by.
rock on \m/
hmmmm....wow!!!
Fanaa? :)
Keshi.
I surrendered long ago.
@seema
hey thanks alot... for your kind words.... i m glad u found it different! thou there is nufin different bout it!
@priya
thank u so much... but how can u go 50/50?
@incredible
thanks for visiting my space.. but i didn't get the meaning in relation to this post
@jeya
thanks alot brother... i guess in some cases ignorance is bliss! :)
@alok
ah... i xpected this kinda answer from u... u r the brave one my friend! nd thanks for ur appriciations! i m glad my work made u think! but dun think too much its no use.. :) lolz!
@deepesh
thanks my friend :)
i so wish i cud learn the art of selflessness.. coz i m selfish! very selfish!
@cindrella
how do i run on??
i never ran.. i just float gurl...
:)call this my madness calll it my sickness...
*decide to search for her again, within words and worlds, people and their webs....*
indeed.. don't v all blogger do the same in our own different ways? :)
@shake
thanks brother.. for ur appriciation nd visitng my blog.. :) hope to see more of u.
@asmita
:) :) thank you so much... but i still wud ask u for n answer... thanks once again for visiting my blog.
@keshi
fanaa? really? how? :)
@aria
aah! u gurl i feel... r my own reflection! :)
this poem sent shivers down my spine. Especially the concept of surrendering to oneself.
I think you're right... we're definitely on the same spiritual/poetry plane.
Sometimes surrendering takes more courage than holding on...
Very well written! :)
I am please yet another time after reading your poem ... Very different!!
:)
Firstly,Thanks for linking my blog to yours.
Surrender to ones own self is the most difficult form of surrender,however,when done,is the most sublime form of peace.
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