I am not smiling :( sent a chill down the spine ..
but a good part abt this piece is its pivotal nature ... had u not used the word 'went' I would have felt like standing on the edge of my balcony and shouting .... at the top of my voice ... and tht wld hv been a shout of the ecstasy ...
and to content .... very easy to know .. very difficult to comprehend ...
thanks a ton guys for your appriciations... but what i find intresting here is the kind of interpretations you guys are deriving from these lines... i wrote this piece in a "very" different context... once again thanks a ton! :D
dude.. i m so sorry for what happened with ya,,, :)
@cinderella
well,since some time i have been writing a plot of my book. this piece talks about "death" and how a man walks smiling right into it. well thats all i could tell you right now... welll i will start posting the parts to a selected bunch of ppl. and ask them for their reviews... u might b one of em' so u can have a better understand of where these lines come from. :)
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I am not smiling :( sent a chill down the spine ..
but a good part abt this piece is its pivotal nature ... had u not used the word 'went' I would have felt like standing on the edge of my balcony and shouting .... at the top of my voice ... and tht wld hv been a shout of the ecstasy ...
and to content .... very easy to know .. very difficult to comprehend ...
Alok
"fly away to eternity,
and beyond"
*sigh*
that beyond touch was classic... kind of excursion into the uncanny.
this smiling adieu is unsettling..
The path of angels:)
"Goodbyes' always left me in tears, until I learnt that it comes with the entire package.
So this one, to me, is nice.
I'm smiling.
:)
@awll
thanks a ton guys for your appriciations... but what i find intresting here is the kind of interpretations you guys are deriving from these lines... i wrote this piece in a "very" different context...
once again thanks a ton! :D
abe.. raat ke 1:35 maj rahe hain ..
adiey bol kar kahan jaa raha hai ??
I just retunred from Bmby after getting my screwed badly.
Then let us know the context, wouldja ?
@DD
dude.. i m so sorry for what happened with ya,,, :)
@cinderella
well,since some time i have been writing a plot of my book. this piece talks about "death" and how a man walks smiling right into it.
well thats all i could tell you right now... welll i will start posting the parts to a selected bunch of ppl. and ask them for their reviews... u might b one of em' so u can have a better understand of where these lines come from. :)
then i read it right .. didn't I ... now I am smiling all the way to the bank :))))
Then I think I read it the way it was meant to be na ?
I will love to read your book. I want to have one of mine too, but then I dunno...
Goodluck with the book.
Wherever he goes,may luck shine on him! :)
That’s what we could do to wish someone for there path to give him satisfaction, the smile.
Yes,one should walk away smiling...
Smiling,thinking there would be greener pastures...
Irony...
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