Caught amongst,
some drifting dreams,
echoing silence,
of a shallow mind.
it writes again,
writes the deja-vu’s
Deja-vu’s,
of a hollow life.
begin thy journey,
once again,
to the moment.
When it stares,
stares right at you,
again…..
p.s- I happen to have one of 'these' last nite and it freaked me out bigtime. Hence the post.
13 comments:
A nightmare dream huh!!!
WOW ur quite the writer ha!
tnxx for stopping by my blog. :)
Keshi.
***once again,
to the moment.
When it stares,
stares right at you,
again…..
Loved this part. DEja Vu indeeds.
Thanks for visiting my blog!:D
Cheerios!
HOw true !
Beautiful.
Hope you are feeling better now!
Have a nice weekend :)
I love the images that you drew out of it .. the last verse was almost ... like on ur face .. good work
Alok
Nice wordz peoples.
scary !! darawana ... :)
I hear you ..
Nice verse :)
@priya
nightmare... not sure!
freaky.. yes!
@keshi
the feeling is completely mutual.. welcome 2 my rambling space.
@sweetstickychew
thanks alot for visiting. thanks alot for ur compliments.. hope to see here often!
@cindrella
:)
thank u!
@sameera
i m rocking as eva...
thanks alot :) wished u too had a rockin weekend
@alok
hey thanks buddy! :)
@the boss
hey thanks homie.... thanks for visiting!!! :)
@deepesh
scaary? why?
@aria
:) i do talk to you sometimes specifically!
@jeevan
thanks alot bro for visitng my space. hope 2 se u here often!
stares right at you"
Catch it and leave it, for flying fishing is what we do best. Its the lymph, you are the surgeon, like you are the fisherman on the bed of dreams.
ahh very sublime... makes an interesting read. nice blogspace
Keep writing
happy living!
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